Looking for an alternative dialogue tag?

 Looking for an alternative dialogue tag?

Read Write Think created a handy PDF file of various dialogue tags. 

Although I have to say I've been advised against using laughed. Hope it is of use to you.

Dialogue Tags 

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Dialogue Should Be Brief

Dialogue Should Be Brief

1. Dialogue should be brief.
2. It should add to the reader’s present knowledge.
3. It should eliminate the routine exchanges of ordinary conversation.
4. It should convey a sense of spontaneity but eliminate the repetitiveness of real talk.
5. It should keep the story moving forward.
6. It should be revelatory of the speaker’s character, both directly and indirectly.
7. It should show the relationships among people.
ELIZABETH BOWEN