When you describe  the miserable and unfortunate, and want to make the reader feel pity,  try to be somewhat colder–that seems to give a kind of background to  another’s grief, against which it stands out more clearly. Whereas in  your story the characters cry and you sigh. Yes, be more cold. The more  objective you are, the stronger will be the impression you make.
 
ANTON CHEKHOV
ANTON CHEKHOV
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